Negative Critique

One of my main problems with my negatives is that there is water spots on it but luckily i can take care of that. Most of mine are in focus but i feel like i didn't fill the fame it all of the pictures when i could have. My favorites are number eleven and number eight. They really aren't the best but i like them. They are focused and i really like them because they are cute. Number eleven has a cool lighting in the background and I'm curious to see what that's going to come out as and how it will look.